Thanks for having a go at this Summer Learning Journey activity, 'You are my Sunshine', and for providing us with 5 different ways to stay 'Sunsmart'. Remember, although it's really great to have information about the subject you're talking about, it's really important that we write this in our own words. Another way to avoid plagiarism, if we're taking information such as "The sun is the star at the centre of the solar system..."— it's good for us to let our readers know where we got this information from and we can 'cite' this. For example, at the end of this paragraph we could write, in brackets: (Wikipedia).
I really appreciate all of your advice for how to stay 'Sunsmart'— it's so important that we wear sunscreen, even when the weather is overcast. I really like your advice under #5— particularly that you've provided the type of fabric that will help protect your skin, good job!
I'll give you full points for this activity, but I would appreciate you either citing your work in the future, or writing things out in your own words.
Kia Ora Roseena,
ReplyDeleteThanks for having a go at this Summer Learning Journey activity, 'You are my Sunshine', and for providing us with 5 different ways to stay 'Sunsmart'. Remember, although it's really great to have information about the subject you're talking about, it's really important that we write this in our own words. Another way to avoid plagiarism, if we're taking information such as "The sun is the star at the centre of the solar system..."— it's good for us to let our readers know where we got this information from and we can 'cite' this. For example, at the end of this paragraph we could write, in brackets: (Wikipedia).
I really appreciate all of your advice for how to stay 'Sunsmart'— it's so important that we wear sunscreen, even when the weather is overcast. I really like your advice under #5— particularly that you've provided the type of fabric that will help protect your skin, good job!
I'll give you full points for this activity, but I would appreciate you either citing your work in the future, or writing things out in your own words.
Keep up the great Google Slides, all the same :)
Cheers,
Jordan