Hello Roseena, I am Vitaraag. Your choices were delicious. Maybe Next time you could put the paragraphs in your own words because people want to see you not google. But overall I think you did really well. Keep up the good work!
Hi Roseena, I am Gargee from Hay Park School, moving on to intermediate at the end of the holidays. I have learnt a lot from the Summer Learning Journey, and it seems like you have too! I live how you put lots of my favourite fruits and veges in there, like plums and cherries, because in mine, I put stuff my family needs as well. Next time I think that maybe you could get the paragraph by google and paraphrase it (change it into your own words) so that you and us will understand.
Hi Roseena, I am Gargee from Hay Park School, moving on to intermediate at the end of the holidays. I have learnt a lot from the Summer Learning Journey, and it seems like you have too! I live how you put lots of my favourite fruits and veges in there, like plums and cherries, because in mine, I put stuff my family needs as well. Next time I think that maybe you could get the paragraph by google and paraphrase it (change it into your own words) so that you and us will understand. I am very sorry that there is 2 comments, the one above is my home account!
Well done for charging through these activities, you're so close to finishing! Keep up the great blogging because remember this programme is based on a points system. So, the more activities you complete and the more thoughtful comments you leave on other students blog pages... the higher chance you have of receiving one of our cool prizes!
Keep up the blogging, you've only got 11 more activities until you've completed the programme! I see you've mentioned that your first paragraph was written by Google, Well done thats so great to see you've acknowledged the source of your research. That makes me very proud to see. Remember to watch the video on Citation's that i've left for you on the activity, 'Persistent Pollution' this will help you a lot!
Thanks for sharing with us the long list of fruits and vegetables you want to plant in your garden at home. You'd be able to supply yourself with lots of food throughout the year if you grew all of those in your garden. Just like you, I would love to have a peach tree at my house. I would cut them up and make peach and yoghurt smoothies for breakfast. I'm curious to know what cassava is? I've never had the chance to try this vegetable. What does it taste like?
My name is Hinerangi, I go to Pt England School and I am currently a year 7 going on to year 8 as soon as School begins. I love blog commenting on these sort of posts as they are super cool and looks absolutely delicious. I would also agree with you by growing the Lettuce and Cucumbers, If you didn't know Cucumbers are one of my favourite veges as it tastes very refreshing and surprisingly "YUMMY"! What's your most favourite Veggie?
Overall excellent finish to this post, keep up the great work and hope to see more from you very soon!
Hello Roseena,
ReplyDeleteI am Vitaraag. Your choices were delicious. Maybe Next time you could put the paragraphs in your own words because people want to see you not google. But overall I think you did really well. Keep up the good work!
Vitaraag
Hi Roseena,
ReplyDeleteI am Gargee from Hay Park School, moving on to intermediate at the end of the holidays. I have learnt a lot from the Summer Learning Journey, and it seems like you have too! I live how you put lots of my favourite fruits and veges in there, like plums and cherries, because in mine, I put stuff my family needs as well. Next time I think that maybe you could get the paragraph by google and paraphrase it (change it into your own words) so that you and us will understand.
Happy Blogging
hpsgargeej.blogspot.co.nz
ReplyDeleteHi Roseena,
I am Gargee from Hay Park School, moving on to intermediate at the end of the holidays. I have learnt a lot from the Summer Learning Journey, and it seems like you have too! I live how you put lots of my favourite fruits and veges in there, like plums and cherries, because in mine, I put stuff my family needs as well. Next time I think that maybe you could get the paragraph by google and paraphrase it (change it into your own words) so that you and us will understand. I am very sorry that there is 2 comments, the one above is my home account!
Happy Blogging
hpsgargeej.blogspot.co.nz
Kia Ora Roseena,
ReplyDeleteWell done for charging through these activities, you're so close to finishing! Keep up the great blogging because remember this programme is based on a points system. So, the more activities you complete and the more thoughtful comments you leave on other students blog pages... the higher chance you have of receiving one of our cool prizes!
Keep up the blogging, you've only got 11 more activities until you've completed the programme!
I see you've mentioned that your first paragraph was written by Google, Well done thats so great to see you've acknowledged the source of your research. That makes me very proud to see. Remember to watch the video on Citation's that i've left for you on the activity, 'Persistent Pollution' this will help you a lot!
Thanks for sharing with us the long list of fruits and vegetables you want to plant in your garden at home. You'd be able to supply yourself with lots of food throughout the year if you grew all of those in your garden. Just like you, I would love to have a peach tree at my house. I would cut them up and make peach and yoghurt smoothies for breakfast. I'm curious to know what cassava is? I've never had the chance to try this vegetable. What does it taste like?
I look forward to reading your reply.
Thanks,
Jordan
Kia Ora Roseena,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Hinerangi, I go to Pt England School and I am currently a year 7 going on to year 8 as soon as School begins. I love blog commenting on these sort of posts as they are super cool and looks absolutely delicious. I would also agree with you by growing the Lettuce and Cucumbers, If you didn't know Cucumbers are one of my favourite veges as it tastes very refreshing and surprisingly "YUMMY"! What's your most favourite Veggie?
Overall excellent finish to this post, keep up the great work and hope to see more from you very soon!
Kind Regards,
Hinerangi