Thanks for taking the time to work through another SLJ activity, 'The Black Drain' and for telling us about 2 rivers outside of New Zealand as well as 2 rivers within New Zealand itself.
Remember that writing in your own words is critically important because it showcases to your readers that you've gone through the effort to do the research and have managed to grasp an understanding from the readings. I can see that these rivers have been copied and pasted from the internet— which is fine, we all make mistakes, but it's really important that we don't plagiarise. If I plagiarised at university, I'd be in A LOT of trouble. So we want to break the habit early so that you succeed (as I know you can) in your future :)
Have a go at editing this post and writing it in your own words, I'll keep an eye on this in the meantime.
Kia Ora Roseena,
ReplyDeleteThanks for taking the time to work through another SLJ activity, 'The Black Drain' and for telling us about 2 rivers outside of New Zealand as well as 2 rivers within New Zealand itself.
Remember that writing in your own words is critically important because it showcases to your readers that you've gone through the effort to do the research and have managed to grasp an understanding from the readings. I can see that these rivers have been copied and pasted from the internet— which is fine, we all make mistakes, but it's really important that we don't plagiarise. If I plagiarised at university, I'd be in A LOT of trouble. So we want to break the habit early so that you succeed (as I know you can) in your future :)
Have a go at editing this post and writing it in your own words, I'll keep an eye on this in the meantime.
Kia kaha, Roseena!
Jordan