Talofa!, This is Activity 3, from Day 1, Week 1
This activity is about choosing a charity I am interested in and telling the reader what this charity does.
I've chosen this because
I've known some friends/relatives who suffer from cancer
and I know that many people suffer from the disease
Hey Roseena,
ReplyDeleteI’m Daniel, the bog commenter for the Kootuitui schools in Papakura. I’m really excited to see your posts this week and over the summer and look forward to commenting on your awesome posts.
Your slide show is really impressive and I love the pictures, sparkling stars and the animations. The link to donate and support their work is an awesome touch as well. I think it's really cool you shared a little bit of yourself and the reasons you chose to do this one. It's unfortunately common that our friends and family suffer from cancer and the work that people do to ease that suffering is so important.
You've got lots of good information and pictures form their website and while some of this looks like it's in your own words or has been paraphrased, It seems some of it has been lifted from the internet, I'm not too sure but either way, always make sure you a very careful to research and then write the information in your own words rather than copy-pasting.
This is amazing work and I'm looking forward to seeing more.
Daniel :)