Malo e leilei! This is Activity 2 from Day 2, Week 1
For this activity we had to create a poem describing what
we would feel like when we first
step on the moon.
For this activity we had to create a poem describing what
we would feel like when we first
step on the moon.
Kia ora Roseena
ReplyDeleteThis is a great poem and I like the way you have posted it with the astronaut and the moon.
Keep up the great work
Molly
Malo e leilei Roseena,
ReplyDeleteYour moon poem is really descriptive, the feelings are tangible. I love the play off of the expressions of 'Weight on my shoulders' as you become weightless and the butterflies disappeared in a glace. The background, pictures and sparkle effect work really well together for you presentation too. Nice job Roseena.
See you in the comments.
Daniel :D