Story of the Week

  Story of the Week

Plan :  

A girl walking in the city

Name : Sena

Mood : Positive

Atmosphere : Sunny Day

Start Writing Here :

Sena, a small female sauntering down the city pavements while the towers toppled over her like great giants.   The monstrous skyscrapers bypassed the girl as her small steps gradually infused with enjoyment and excitement, and immediately ended with the result of her joyfully skipping.  The sky was pervaded with ruffling clouds that formed into significant shapes, more than you could ever think of! A mix of rich scents smothered in the air while an abundance of colours were seen everywhere her eyes laid.   Chatter drowned beneath the lofty roofs and almost every second, countless people wandered the place with smiles plastered onto their faces.  Senas lustreless hair curled in the ambience of the strong breeze as her hands were gripped to her shopping bags. 

Feedback: It was really good  and long  but also added a lot of words I don't  understand.

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Hello Everyone!

This is my story of the week.  For this task we

were given the task to write a story about ANYTHING

and the challenge was to avoid talking about what

the character is doing but the atmosphere!